Thursday, 15 June 2017

I have finally arrived

I have finally arrived at space. I could look at planets and shiny shooting stars. Next I could smell stinky gooing chese of the planets. Then I could air aliens in rusty old rockets. Finally maybe I could be a tester by testing planets and hard rocks. By Charlotte I have finally arrived at space. I could look at planets and shiny shooting stars. Next I could smell stinky gooing chese of the planets. Then I could air aliens in rusty old rockets. Finally maybe I could be a tester by testing planets and hard rocks. By Charlotte I have finally arrived at space. I could look at planets and shiny shooting stars. Next I could smell stinky gooing chese of the planets. Then I could air aliens in rusty old rockets. Finally maybe I could be a tester by testing planets and hard rocks. By Charlotte I have finally arrived at space. I could look at planets and shiny shooting stars. Next I could smell stinky gooing chese of the planets. Then I could air aliens in rusty old rockets. Finally maybe I could be a tester by testing planets and hard rocks. By Charlotte
I have finally arrived at space. I could look at planets and shiny shooting stars. Next I could smell stinky gooing chese of the planets. Then I could air aliens in rusty old rockets. Finally maybe I could be a tester by testing planets and hard rocks.



By Charlotte

2 comments:

  1. Hi Charlotte!

    My name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!

    This looks like some great descriptive writing! I wonder why the planets smell like stinky gooey cheese?
    I love how you have written about your space arrival I can only image how you must have felt seeing, hearing and smelling all these things!
    This is a great story and I can't wait to see what you might post for the Summer Learning Journey.

    If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can copy the URL below:
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/

    Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!

    Ellee :)

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  2. Thank you for the kind comment I am so sorry I have not answered for all this time but I hope I will comment to you again, I do a lot of writing & especially descriptive words! I enjoy looking at your blog too enjoy your Summer enjoy school & I will blog to you again sometime soon, truly your Charlotte!

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